I am so tired of pretending...
- 12.05.11, 20:24
- ÑÒÈÕÈ, ÑÒÈÕÈ, ÑÒÈÕÈ
My soul is vine, twisted by bending.
My lie is so ajour as lace.
If someone hates me, I don't care,
And I don't mind to see this hate.
But I can't stand... How does one dare
To love me? That's my fucking fate
To love just You, who's scared to mention
My name... Who always looks for gist,
But even wouldn't pay attention
If I once die like hunted beast.
No, I don't judge... I have no power.
And I don't ask about your choice
To keep yourself in empty tower,
Not seeing Love not hearing voice
Of it... But i can't more pretending...
I don't exist without you...
And if my life is senseless spending
Of days, I need at least just few...
Few days fullfilled with love and you.

Êîìåíòàð³
óñòü: bayok
112.05.11, 23:09
Âèøåíêà, à òû óâåðåíà, ÷òî ýòî áóäóò òóò ÷èòàòü?
ß ìíîãî òåêñòîâ ïåðåâîäèë, Ìîðèñîíà, äàæå ÌàêÊàðòíè. Íå ïîëó÷àþòñÿ ñòèõè!
Ó íèõ, ÷óòü äðóãàÿ ñèñòåìà ñòèõîñëîæåíèÿ
Íî...òåáå âèäíåå...
Cherry-Moon
213.05.11, 01:48³äïîâ³äü íà 1 â³ä óñòü: bayok
ß óæå êîìó-òî îòâå÷àëà, ÷òî ñòèõè âûêëàäûâàþ íå äëÿ òîãî, ÷òîáû èõ ÷èòàëè, à ÷òîáû îíè áûëè âñå âìåñòå ñîáðàíû. Òàê ÷òî ìíå âñ¸ ðàâíî

Ìåòðèêà âî âñåõ ÿçûêàõ îäèíàêîâàÿ, íå ñ÷èòàÿ ñòðàí, ãäå îíà íå ïðèçíàíà, à åñëè ïåðåâîäèòü Ìîðèñîíà èëè ÌàêÊàðòíè, òàê, ïîíÿòíîå äåëî, îíè, êàê-áû, íå ñîâñåì ïîýòû è íå ñîâñåì êëàññè÷åñêèå. ß æå íå ïåðåâîæó, à ïèøó ñâî¸, âîò è âñ¸.
È, êñòàòè, ðàíüøå ÿ ïèñàëà òîëüêî íà àíãëèéñêîì, ýòî ñåé÷àñ ÿ ñïîïñèëàñü äî ðîìàíòèêè è ðóññêîãî ñ óêðàèíñêèì. Ðàíüøå áûëà ñîöèàëêà è òîëüêî íà èíãëèøå
óñòü: bayok
313.05.11, 09:23³äïîâ³äü íà 2 â³ä Cherry-Moon
Understood. Then I wish you success! On the Russian-Ukrainian site. By the way, I also collect all of the verses in bloge.

óñòü: AngelAngi
413.05.11, 09:25
Îáàëäåòü!!! Ìîëîä÷èíêà!!!
Cherry-Moon
513.05.11, 19:24³äïîâ³äü íà 4 â³ä óñòü: AngelAngi
Ñïàñèáî!
tessi
629.07.11, 01:01
Cherry-Moon
729.07.11, 02:32³äïîâ³äü íà 6 â³ä tessi
Thank you