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I am so tired of pretending...

I am so tired of pretending, 
Of artificial embrace. 
My soul is vine, twisted by bending. 
My lie is so ajour as lace. 
If someone hates me, I don't care, 
And I don't mind to see this hate. 
But I can't stand... How does one dare 
To love me? That's my fucking fate 
To love just You, who's scared to mention 
My name... Who always looks for gist, 
But even wouldn't pay attention 
If I once die like hunted beast. 
No, I don't judge... I have no power. 
And I don't ask about your choice 
To keep yourself in empty tower, 
Not seeing Love not hearing voice 
Of it... But i can't more pretending... 
I don't exist without you... 
And if my life is senseless spending 
Of days, I need at least just few... 
Few days fullfilled with love and you.




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óñòü: bayok

112.05.11, 23:09

Âèøåíêà, à òû óâåðåíà, ÷òî ýòî áóäóò òóò ÷èòàòü? ß ìíîãî òåêñòîâ ïåðåâîäèë, Ìîðèñîíà, äàæå ÌàêÊàðòíè. Íå ïîëó÷àþòñÿ ñòèõè! Ó íèõ, ÷óòü äðóãàÿ ñèñòåìà ñòèõîñëîæåíèÿ Íî...òåáå âèäíåå...

    213.05.11, 01:48³äïîâ³äü íà 1 â³ä óñòü: bayok

    ß óæå êîìó-òî îòâå÷àëà, ÷òî ñòèõè âûêëàäûâàþ íå äëÿ òîãî, ÷òîáû èõ ÷èòàëè, à ÷òîáû îíè áûëè âñå âìåñòå ñîáðàíû. Òàê ÷òî ìíå âñ¸ ðàâíî
    Ìåòðèêà âî âñåõ ÿçûêàõ îäèíàêîâàÿ, íå ñ÷èòàÿ ñòðàí, ãäå îíà íå ïðèçíàíà, à åñëè ïåðåâîäèòü Ìîðèñîíà èëè ÌàêÊàðòíè, òàê, ïîíÿòíîå äåëî, îíè, êàê-áû, íå ñîâñåì ïîýòû è íå ñîâñåì êëàññè÷åñêèå. ß æå íå ïåðåâîæó, à ïèøó ñâî¸, âîò è âñ¸.
    È, êñòàòè, ðàíüøå ÿ ïèñàëà òîëüêî íà àíãëèéñêîì, ýòî ñåé÷àñ ÿ ñïîïñèëàñü äî ðîìàíòèêè è ðóññêîãî ñ óêðàèíñêèì. Ðàíüøå áûëà ñîöèàëêà è òîëüêî íà èíãëèøå

      óñòü: bayok

      313.05.11, 09:23³äïîâ³äü íà 2 â³ä Cherry-Moon

      ß óæå êîìó-òî îòâå÷àëà, ÷òî ñòèõè âûêëàäûâàþ íå äëÿ òîãî, ÷òîáû èõ ÷èòàëè, à ÷òîáû îíè áûëè âñå âìåñòå ñîáðàíû. Òàê ÷òî ìíå âñ¸ ðàâíî
      Ìåòðèêà âî âñåõ ÿçûêàõ îäèíàêîâàÿ, íå ñ÷èòàÿ ñòðàí, ãäå îíà íå ïðèçíàíà, à åñëè ïåðåâîäèòü Ìîðèñîíà èëè ÌàêÊàðòíè, òàê, ïîíÿòíîå äåëî, îíè, êàê-áû, íå ñîâñåì ïîýòû è íå ñîâñåì êëàññè÷åñêèå. ß æå íå ïåðåâîæó, à ïèøó ñâî¸, âîò è âñ¸.
      È, êñòàòè, ðàíüøå ÿ ïèñàëà òîëüêî íà àíãëèéñêîì, ýòî ñåé÷àñ ÿ ñïîïñèëàñü äî ðîìàíòèêè è ðóññêîãî ñ óêðàèíñêèì. Ðàíüøå áûëà ñîöèàëêà è òîëüêî íà èíãëèøå
      Understood. Then I wish you success! On the Russian-Ukrainian site. By the way, I also collect all of the verses in bloge.

        óñòü: AngelAngi

        413.05.11, 09:25

        Îáàëäåòü!!! Ìîëîä÷èíêà!!!

          513.05.11, 19:24³äïîâ³äü íà 4 â³ä óñòü: AngelAngi

          Ñïàñèáî!

            629.07.11, 01:01

              729.07.11, 02:32³äïîâ³äü íà 6 â³ä tessi

              Thank you